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The chart provides a information of the amount of traveller who used different airports in NewYork from 1995 to 2000.
Overall, we can see that the amount of people who used airport increased over the given period. In the first years ( 1995, 1996,1997) traveller had a trend that used John.F.Kenendy airport. Besides the Laguralia airport was used popular in 2000.
The number of passengers who used Kennedy airport was, at 26 millions of people in first years after that reached the high peak, at 47 millions of people in 1997, after 3 years the figure decreased to 45 millions of people. In addition, the people using network airport was quite low, about 16 millions of people in 1995 and continued sharply rise, approximately 40 millions of people which fluctuate in left 3 years ( 1998,1999,2000), just over 40 millions of people.
On the other hand, the number of those using Lagurarida airport increased over the given period, from 35 millions of people in 1995 to 68 millions of people in 2000.
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- " Be sure you spell the names correctly.
- The chart provides a information (Information is non-count.
- ) of the amount (wrong word.
- Amount is used for non-count nouns.
- ) who used different airports in NewYork from 1995 to 2000.
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Incorrect phrasing: not "23 millions of people," but "23 million people." Be sure you spell the names correctly.
The chart provides a information (Information is non-count. "a information" is incorrect.) of the amount (wrong word. Amount is used for non-count nouns.
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