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The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories. The line graph compares the average number of hour allocated to produce a car by four distinct vehicles corporations including general motor, Ford, Toyota and, Honda in the USA from 1998 to 2005.Overall, the average time taken to produce a car in US factories decreased over the period. Meanwhile, General Motors reduced the time of car production by more hours than the other companies.In 1998, General motor spent 32 hours to produce a car, compared to 28 hours by Ford and 22 hours by Toyota and Honda each. Then the number of average hours spent on the production of a car by Ford reached a peak of almost 32 hours in 2001. While the production time generally decreased in the following years, the figures fluctuated.During the period, there was a slight reduction in the average hours of manufacture for Toyota and Honda, which spent the same production time per car in 2005, 20 hours. General motor showed a consistent decrease to 22 hours to produce a car by 2005. In the same year, there was a drop of 10 hours to just below 22 hours in case of Ford after the time spent considerably fluctuated.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The line graph compares the average number of hour (wrong form) ~~allocated~~ (wrong word) required to produce a car by four ~~distinct~~ vehicles (wrong form) ~~corporations~~ manufacturers including general motor, (wrong form - the name is incorrect in the figure. - General Motors) Ford, Toyota and, Honda ~~in the USA~~ from 1998 to 2005. All data is from plants in the USA.

Overall, the average time taken to produce a car in US factories decreased over the period. ~~Meanwhile~~, (wrong word) General Motors reduced the time of car production by more hours than the other companies. The two Japanese companies had the smaller variations in production time and produced cars more quickly than the two American companies.

In 1998, General Motors ~~motor~~ spent 32 hours to produce a car, compared to 28 hours by Ford and 22 hours by Toyota and Honda each. Then the number of average hours spent on the production of a car by Ford reached a peak of almost 32 hours in 2001. While the production time generally decreased in the following years, the figures (wrong word - numbers) fluctuated. (wrong word usage)

During the period, there was a slight reduction in the average hours of manufacture for Toyota and Honda, which had ~~spent~~ the same production time per car in 2005, 20 hours. General motor showed a consistent decrease to 22 hours to produce a car by 2005. In the same year, there was a drop of 10 hours to just below 22 hours in case of Ford after the time spent considerably fluctuated. (wrong words, wrong word order - varied considerably.)

Since the curve for General Motors is practically linear, you can compute the rate of decrease and get very high marks!

General Motors, 1998 = 32 hours
General Motors, 2005= 22 hours

Difference in hours = 10 hours
Difference in time = 7 years

Rate of decline = 10 hours ÷ 7 years = 1.4 hours per year.

This text shows the correct use of the word "fluctuation." To use "fluctuation" correctly, there must be a trend line.

General Motors lowered its production time steadily over the seven-year period, at a rate of about 1.4 hours per year. There were minor fluctuations with respect to the declining trend line.

Air gray 69 · Answer

The line graph gives information about how much time was needed for four car manufacturers to the production of vehicles at the US factories from 1998 to 2005.

Overall, it is evident from the chart that although the numbers of hours per vehicle were different for all four types of manufacturers in the first year, there has been almost the same amount of time by the end of period given.

Looking at the details, the Ford manufactured vehicles spending 28 hours for each of it in the first year, while it took 32 hours doing the same thing for General Motor. However, after one year and a couple of months the amount of time which was spent by ford overtook the General Motor, accounting for 29 hours for each vehicle. After increasing till 2001, the manufacturer Ford reached its peak and decreased slightly by the end of the time span. Likewise, the General Motor continued falling down till the end, even though it remained to be the highest indicator of manufactured hours in the end.

In addition, Toyota and Honda started the period with the same number of hours, at 22, before again reaching the same level in 2001. After growing up through one year period by 2 hours, each of the manufacturers dropped slightly till 2005, with approximately 20 hours of spent time by both of these manufacturers.

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