Writing task 1. Please review my Ielts essay

The table represents the results of research asking opinions of people about celebrity news coverage.

At the first question asking how people think of the amount of celebrities coverage, surprisingly, individuals said that there is too much news coverage of famous people, at 85%. In contrast, the percentages of people who found that the coverage is enough or not stand at 7% and 6% respectively.

In terms of the obligation for the news coverage, more than half of those surveyed supposed that this is the responsibility of news organizations. Besides, around one-third said it is associated with the public.

Finally, when being questioned about where they can see the most coverage, 60% of viewpoints sided with television news whereas below one in five said that they meet them on the websites. On the other hand, just slightly 8% of opinions supposed that they read and hear the news coverage from the old-fashioned appliances, the newspapers, and radio.