Writing task 1 - please help me check it

The line graph gives information about quantity of books that were read at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.

In general, the number of books were read by men, that grew significantly in over the period 4 years starting in 2011. Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation trend of number of books read by women.

At the beginning in 2011, the quantity of books read by men, which were 3000 and less than ones were read by women. After that, there was a considerable development tendency of number of book read by male reader from 4000 in 2012 to 15000 in 2014.

In the other hand, the amount of book read by female reader grew sharply from 2011 and peaked at 10000 in 2013. Since then, in 2014, there was a downward trend of number of books read by women in the next year, which were 8000 and nearly a half of quantity of books read by men in the same time.