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Give me some advices ,a score above scrore 10. 
The pie chart provides a breakdown of the average household expenditure for Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010
Looking at the pie chart, it is immediately obvious that People who lived in Malaysisa have trend to spending on housing. Besides, the popullation people in Japan an almost trend to out going on other good and services.
In Maylaysia, the percentage of expenditure on housing was highest, at 34%, while the figure for other good and services was slightly lower, at 26%. In Japan the people have trend by contrast , the biggest rate of expenditure on othergood and services was, at 29 %, while the quantity for housing was marginally lower, at 21%. Besides we can saw that the rate spending on housing in Japan significantly smaller compared to on housing in Malaysia exactly by 13%. In addition, the people aslo outgoing on food in Japan (24%) and in Malaysia (27%)
Interesting enough, the transport and health care in Japan accounted 20% and 6% respectively. Meanwhile , in Malaysia the figure for which is half their equivalents Japan was ,at 10% and 3%
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Bigdream Give me some advice , and a score above scrore 10. The highest score on IELTS is band 9. You cannot possibly get a 10, no matter what you write.
- Bigdream Give me some advice , and a score above scrore 10.
- The highest score on IELTS is band 9.
- You cannot possibly get a 10, no matter what you write.
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Vermus .BigdreamGive me some advice, and a score abovescrore10.
The highest score on IELTS is band 9. You cannot possibly get a 10, no matter what you write.
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The pie chart (There is more than one of them.) provides a breakdown of the average household expenditure (There is more than one of them.) for Japan and Malaysia (Not the countries, but the residents of those countries) in the year 2010 (missing punctuation)
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