Writing task 1 please help

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The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows data about the number of the different major teacher in a university in a country between 2005 and 2013.
It is noticeable that there was more academic staff in all fields except for Agriculture and Education. Medicine was a subject which attracts the most teacher whereas the figure of Agriculture staff was lowest through the years.
According to the table, 30664 people who taught medicine in university in 2005. After seven years, the number increased by 20.23 percent and remained the highest figure. The number of Business staff also rose and reached around 28769 people in 2013. Humanities and Engineering teacher increased slightly around 12000 - 17000 people in the period.
By contrast, Agriculture staff not just had the lowest teacher but also decreased through the years. There were only 1680 people who taught and 47 teachers no longer work in this major in 2013. Besides, the Education staff had 10964 teachers in 2005, and the number declined rapidly by 334 people in 2013.

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The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows data about the number of the different major teacher (wrong expression) in a university (Do you think that one university would have 36 thousand employees in one department?) in a country between 2005 and 2013.
~~It is noticeable that~~ That is your opinion. In task 1, just describe the graphic provided. Do not draw conclusions or give opinions. "These words are "opinion" words: Clear, evident, obvious, and noticeable) There was more academic staff in all fields except for Agriculture and Education. Medicine was a subject which attracts (wrong tense, also "attracts" is a "conclusion" word.) the most teacher (wrong form, wrong word) whereas the figure of Agriculture staff was lowest through the years.

~~According to the table,~~ (This is not necessary. The reader knows you are describing the table that you introduced in the opening sentence.) 30664 people who (This word turns your sentence into a fragment; a dependent clause) taught (wrong word) medicine in university in 2005. After seven years, the number increased by 20.23 percent and remained the highest figure. The number of Business staff (wrong expression. ) also rose and reached around 28769 people in 2013. Humanities and Engineering teacher increased slightly around 12000 - 17000 (That many were added to the staff?) people in the period.
By contrast, Agriculture staff not just had the lowest teacher (wrong expression. We do not use "low" and "high" to describe people. The shortest person or the tallest person.) but also decreased through the years. There were only 1680 people who taught (wrong word) and 47 teachers no longer work in this major in 2013. Besides, the Education staff had 10964 teachers in 2005, and the number declined rapidly (??) by 334 people in 2013.

Ideas to consider for this essay topic:

In 2005, just over 126 thousand people were employed in colleges and universities in this unnamed country. That grew to over 145 thousand (145752) in 2013, an overall increase of about 16 percent. Of the nine departments (subject areas) listed, six added staff and three lost staff. The department with the largest net gain (35%) was Architecture, with 3204 staff members in 2013. In contrast, Education had a net loss of three percent, but still had 10630 employees in 2013. The teacher-student ratios in 2013 ranged from 1:4 to 1:12. Four departments had ratios between 1:11 and 1:12, another four were between 1:7 and 1:9, and Medicine was the lowest at 1:4, one teacher for every four students.

In both years, Medicine had the largest staff count (30664 and 36868 respectively), which represented nearly one quarter of all academic staff (24% in 2005, 25% in 2013). The second highest numbers were in Business, with an 18% share in 2005 (23,128), and 20% (28,769) in 2013.

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