Writing task 1 number 8

Here is my newest essay after a long time with no posts. I hope you can correct it for me because some of my essays did not get corrected before (. Thanks a lot.

The table shows how many visitors came to Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment, while the charts compare the results of surveys of visitor satisfaction with their visit in the same periods. Overall, after being refurbished, Ashdown Museum attracted more visitors and increased the levels of their satisfaction.

Looking at the table, we can see that the number of visitors increased dramatically to 92.000 after refurbishment from 74.000 during the year before development.

Moving on the charts, it is clear that the percentage of visitors who were very satisfied with their visit showed a dramatic increase of 20% after refurbishment, reaching 35%, compared to 15% before the development. 40% of total visitors to Ashdown Museum said they felt satisfied with their visit when the museum had been refurbished, increasing from under a third before the change. In contrast, the number of dissatisfied visitors saw a considerable decline of 25%, standing at 15% during the year after development. At the same time, the quantity of visitors who were very dissatisfied decreased by twofold, constituting 5% of total visitors. Meanwhile, there was no change in the number of visitors who had no response about their visit before and after Ashdown Museum had been reconstructed, standing at 5% during two periods.