Here is my writing task 1 number 4. I hope it is better. ![]()
The two images illustrate how an island changes when some tourist facilities are constructed. Overall, a wide range of facilities is erected, which dramatically changes the island; while there is no change to the east of the island.
Looking at the first image, we can see that, before the construction for tourist purposes, the island is a tranquil place, stretching on about 250 meters with some trees, and a beach to the west.
Moving on to the second image, the transformation of the island is clear that there are two blocks of accommodation built in the center; one of which surrounds some trees, and has a footpath to the beach. The other is next to the eastern trees. Between these two blocks, a reception unit is constructed, which is surrounded by vehicle track, leading to a new restaurant to the north. To the south of the island, from the reception building, a pier of T-shape is erected in order for tourists to go sailing with some sailboats provided. The last shift of the island is that the beach in the west is exploited for swimming purpose.
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