Writing task 1-number 11

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The bar chart compares men and women in Australia in six age groups in terms of doing regular physical activity in the year 2010. Overall, the 15 to 24 age group showed the highest percentage of Australia men doing physical exercise, while the highest figure for women was in the 45 to 54 age group.

In the 15 to 24 age group, 52.8% of Australian men did regular physical activity, compared to 47.7% of women. The percentages of Australian female citizens who took part in physical exercise regularly were higher than the figures for male in the next four groups. Female inhabitants from 25 to 34 years old who did physical activity in Australia accounted for 48.9% in 2010. This proportion increased to around 53% when they were aged between 35 to 64. Meanwhile, the lowest percentage of Australia men doing physical exercise regularly was seen in the 35 to 44 age group, with 39.5%. This figure then grew to 43.1% and 45.1% in the forth and fifth age group respectively. Finally, about 47% of each gender of Australian people did regular physical exercise when they were 65 and older.