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Strategic Man Posted 5 years ago
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Writing task 1 - Map. This is the first essay I wrote about map. Please help me fix it
- The pictures illustrate the present layouts of a city center and their changes in the future.
- It is clear that only the cinema remains unchanged, while almost all its surrounding areas are planned to be reconstructed to other areas.
- Looking at the pictures in detail, the first car park is to the left of the cinema will have been replaced by a cafe. Also, the hotel and restaurant will have been built in the future, instead of the second car park being the west of the cinema.
- In terms of council offices, they are planned to be constructed at the Southeast corner of the layouts where there is currently an exhibition, while their present position will have been replaced by the underground library. Another exhibition will also have been constructed to the south of the shopping center when this shopping center remains unchanged in the future. In addition, an underground car park is intended to be added to the town hall.
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The pictures illustrate the present layou t of a city center and their how it will look like after some changes in the future. [ 1] It is clear that only the cinema and the shopping centre will remai n unchanged, while almost all the other buildings and facilities will be used for other purposes. its surrounding areas are planned to be reconstructed to other areas.
- The pictures illustrate the present layou t of a city center and their how it will look like after some changes in the future.
- [ 1] It is clear that only the cinema and the shopping centre will remai n unchanged, while almost all the other buildings and facilities will be used for other purposes.
- its surrounding areas are planned to be reconstructed to other areas.
- Looking at the pictures in detail, T he first car park near High Street, is t o the left west of the cinem a, will have been be replaced by a cafe.
- Also, the a new hotel and restaurant will have been be built in the future, instead place of the second car park being the west which is east of the cinema, at the Smith Street end .
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The pictures illustrate the present layout of a city center and their how it will look like after some changes in the future.
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It is clear that only the cinema and the shopping centre will remain
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