Writing Task 1 - Map

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The pictures illustrate how a room is renovated to serve different purposes of the students.

Overall, there are many rearrangements taking place in this room. Some facilities are removed to make place for other modern ones. Some are added to make the room become a more multifunctional venue.

Most of the refurbishment occurs in the middle of the room. The four sets of table and chairs are now reduced to only two, making place for a teamwork table set, which includes one larger rectangular table and eight chairs compared to the round table and four chairs of the old set. By contrast, six sectors against the northern wall mostly remained unchanged, except for a bench that has been replaced by a microwave.

The bookshelf, on the bottom right corner of the room is also replaced by a huge television as well. Long benches dedicated to laptops use only and an armchair are also provided, which are located against the wall, to the northern and the western side of the television.