Writing Task 1- Line graph: the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats
Hello. I have studied English for a short time so my ability of writing a passage is not good. Can you check my writing and give me some advice? Thank you so much.
You can see the chart here: https://www.google.com.vn/search?q=the+consumption+of+fish+and+some+different+kind+of+meats&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiJ19_kmYPUAhWFqJQKHVLxAi4Q_AUIBigB&biw=1280&bih=919#imgdii=YQAScSx6HeFD6M:&imgrc=cHErDbBP6Q8DPM: (I don't know why I can't post the image.)
MY WRITING
"This chart illustrates the demand of consumers for fish and some kind of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, there was only the consumption of chicken increased while the consumptions of beef, lamb and fish decreased.
In 1979, a person ate 60 grams fish, 140 grams chicken, 150 grams lamb and 220 grams beef per week. 25 years ago, fish still was the least commonly used food because its consumption was only 40 grams. Lamb's consumption was so similar to fish but its decline was stronger. Although the consumption grew up in some years, it generally grew down at only 65 grams in 2004.
Beef's consumption showed some fluctuation but at last, it stopped at 110 grams. The figures for chicken had a dramatic change when it jumped to 245 grams. This was the highest figure in 25 years and it indicated that there were more and more people liked chicken."
Top answer
) of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004. Overall, there was only the consumption of chicken increased while the consumptions of beef, lamb and fish decreased. In 1979, a person ate 60 grams fish, 140 grams chicken, 150 grams lamb and 220 grams beef per week.
- ) of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
- Overall, there was only the consumption of chicken increased while the consumptions of beef, lamb and fish decreased.
- In 1979, a person ate 60 grams fish, 140 grams chicken, 150 grams lamb and 220 grams beef per week.
- 25 years ago, fish still was the least commonly used food because its consumption was only 40 grams.
- ) was so similar to fish but its decline was stronger.
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Overall, there was only the consumption of chicken increased while the consumptions of beef, lamb and fish decreased.
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