Writing Task 1 - IELTS

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows the number of population in two countries and the prediction about population growth from 2000 to 2050. There are considerable differences at the growth rate of India and China.

In 2000, there were more people living in China than India. The China population figure was approximately 1250 billion people, while there were 1000 billion people living in India. Both countries population rose steadily during the period between 2000 and 2030, and they reached roughly 1450 billion people in 2030.

After 2030, experts believe that India population will increase faster than China. While China population figure slight go down through year, the number of people living in India rise considerably. Experts say it will achieve 1600 billion people in 2050, when the China figure fall by approximately 50 billion from 1450 billion to 1400 billion by 20 years.

In conclusion, over the 50-year period, the number of people live in India has been increasing more speedily and quickly pass the number of Chinese in 2030, although China with around 1250 billion people in 200 were much higher than India.

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