Writing task 1, hepl me please

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The line graph give information about the number of people use radio and television throughout the day in 1992.

A glance at the graph, it is clear that a large of the audiences listenned radio in the morning. In the contrast, television was used significantly by people in the evening. However, after midnight, there was a downward trend of number of audiences.

At 6 o'clock in the morning, there were nearly 10% of people who listenned radio, that was more than number of television audiences(around 3%). After that time, the radio audiences escalated dramtically from 6 am to 9 am and reached the peak at 26%. Nevertheness, in the rest of the day, there was a gradually decline tendency between 9am and after midnight.

In the other hand, starting at 3% at 6am, the amount of people who watched television grew considerably and hit the highest point at 8pm with 45% that was nearly eight times more than radio audiences. Since then, there was a dinimished rapidly trend of television audiences, that deceased from the peak to nearly 3% after 12pm.

Does this essay reach band 5? thank you verry much.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

An audience is a large group of people who sit in a theater to watch a movie or play or concert. It can be used in this context, but it is used as a non-count mass noun. It is incorrect to use the plural form. We do not use television or radio. We watch TV and listen to radio.

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The line graph give information about the number of people (missing word) use radio and television throughout the day in 1992.

~~A glance at the graph,~~ it is clear that a large (missing word) of the audiences listenned (missing word) radio in the morning. In the contrast, television was used significantly by people in the evening. However, after midnight, there was a downward trend of number of audiences.

At 6 o'clock in the morning, there were nearly 10% of people who listenned (missing word) radio, that was more than number of television audiences(around 3%). After that time, the radio audiences escalated dramtically from 6 am to 9 am and reached the peak at 26%. Nevertheness, in the rest of the day, there was a gradually decline tendency between 9am and after midnight.

In the other hand, starting at 3% at 6am, the amount of people who watched television grew considerably (Very good!) and hit the highest point at 8pm with 45% (missing punctuation) that was nearly eight times more than radio audiences. Since then, there was a dinimished rapidly trend of television audiences, that deceased from the peak to nearly 3% after 12pm.

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