Writing task 1 GT - Please help to check
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You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
- What is the article about?
- What is the error?
- What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the recent article you published about Mr. Scott Roberton in October 26th in the ThanhNienNews.
The article gives an overview about Scott’s life and then continues to focus on his work and his impacts on wildlife conservation in Viet Nam. The story starts with his birth in the United Kingdom in 1979 and he moved to Viet Nam in 2007, where he spent over ten years working in Ha Noi.
I would like to point out a mistake in your article. Scott did not spend the whole ten years in Ha Noi, he did stay and work in the Cuc Phuong National Park for three year from 2010 to 2012. I know this because I worked with him there during that time and we became close friends.
I hope you will make a correction in the newspaper for this error in order to truly and fully reflect Scott’s time in Viet Nam.
I look forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
Viet Tran
Top answer
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter regarding the recent article you published about Mr. Scott Roberton on October 26 th in the ThanhNienNews. The article gives an overview of Scott’s life and then continues to focus on his work and his impact on wildlife conservation in Viet Nam.
- Dear Sir, I am writing this letter regarding the recent article you published about Mr.
- Scott Roberton on October 26 th in the ThanhNienNews.
- The article gives an overview of Scott’s life and then continues to focus on his work and his impact on wildlife conservation in Viet Nam.
- The story starts with his birth in the United Kingdom in 1979 and his move to Viet Nam in 2007, where he spent over ten years working in Ha Noi.
- I would like to point out a mistake in your article.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the recent article you published about Mr. Scott Roberton on October 26th in the ThanhNienNews.
The article gives an overview of Scott’s life and then continues to focus on his work and his impact on
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