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Anhtho1412 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writing task 1 bar chart

The bar chart compares the percentage of men and women in Australia doing regular physical activity in 2010 according to their groups of age.

Overall, it is recognizable that slightly more female chose to do regular physical activity than male. However, completely difference can be seen if we look at the specific age groups for male and female.

While the number of male joining regular physical activity reached a peak at the age from 15 to 24, the highest number of female do laid at the group from 45 to 54. By contrast, male involved in regular activity least from 35 to 44 at 39,5% which also was the lowest number in comparison to female. The least number of female participated was 42.2% in the age groups 24 to 34.

Significantly, there was a noticeable discrepancy between male and female in the age groups from 35 to 44. There was a biggest difference of 13% in the number of female to male. However, the percentage of regular physical activity doers between two genders was almost the same in the age of 65 and over.

  

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age groups is natural. Overall it is recognizable. a bit unnatural.

  • age groups is natural.
  • Overall it is recognizable.
  • a bit unnatural.
  • it is more natural, fits every situation and uses passive grammar which is more academic.
  • overall,it can be seen that...
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Group of age...age groups is natural.

Overall it is recognizable. ...a bit unnatural. ..use this one...it is more natural, fits every situation and uses passive grammar which is more academic. ..overall,it can be seen that...

Be careful. ..male will be males.

Completely different not difference

There was a biggest difference. ...the biggest difference was...

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