Writing task 1

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given illustration provides a clear description of man-made procedure of recycling plastics.

In the general, there is a total of 8 different steps carried out in mainly factories, starting with selling plastics and finishing at new products.

To start with, it can be easily seen that the majority of consumers purchase goods made from plastics that a used widely in daily life of each family. In the second phase, wastes are classified into either bottles or bag and rubbish which are not reused and transported to the landfill. At the following step, the workers gather the bottles after classifying and moving them to sorting house. Moving onto the next stage, a large number of plastics are loaded on trucks and transferred to the factories where take place the procedure of recycling. Once plastics are processed, new products are manufactured and delivered to storage facilities where they are bought and consumed by the users.

Aim: band 6.5 ielts writing task 1 ( at least 150 words)

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