Writing task 1

Please evaluate my essay.

Q : The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram depicts the developmental plan for South west airport which is indented to be implemented by the coming year.
Overall, it can be seen that there is a northward extension for new gates and an additional structure of taxi hire added near the exit of the arrivals.

The check-in port which was on the left side in the old plan will now be moved to the other side, where as the cafe will be shifted to the left side, immediately behind the departure entrance. A new counter for baggage drop will be opened which will be in same line with the cafe. The security and passport control will remain the same, while new shops will be added before the entrance to the gates.
The walkway in he existing airport will be replaced with sky train and about 10 more gates will be added , hence extending the north part. On arrival side, the passport side and customs will have no change , but a new cafe and ATM will be the added feature of the renovated airport. Towards the exit of the arrivals a car hire will also be started.