Writing task 1
The line graph presents the number of members in fitness center from 1980 to 2010 in terms of gender.
Overall, while there was a sharp drop in the men membership of gymnasium, that of women went up after 20 years. Although the total of females initially had lower members, it surpassed that of males at the end of the period.
In 1980, male gym membership was as twice as the number of females, at about 2000 and 1000 respectively. After the first peak in 1985, the number of male members slumped under 2000 in 1995. In contrast, female gym membership hit the highest point about 2900 at the same time.
In the 21st century, the number of males participating in exercise activities peaked at 5000 in 2005 before decreasing rapidly in the next 5 years. With women, although the gym memberships declined, it doubled that of men in 2010, at nearly 2000 and 7000 respectively.
Top answer
(Unnatural expression) Overall, while there was a sharp drop in the men who had membership s of gymnasium , that of women went up after 20 years. Although the total of females initially had lower numbers members , it surpassed that of males at the end of the period. Total membership was less in 2010 than in 1980.
- (Unnatural expression) Overall, while there was a sharp drop in the men who had membership s of gymnasium , that of women went up after 20 years.
- Although the total of females initially had lower numbers members , it surpassed that of males at the end of the period.
- Total membership was less in 2010 than in 1980.
- In 1980, male gym membership s were was as twice as many as the number of females, at about 2000 and 1000 respectively.
- After the first peak in 1985, (at 4000) the number of male members slumped to fall under 2000 in 1995.
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The line graph presents compares the number of men to the number of women who were members in a fitness center from 1980 to 2010 in terms of gender.(Unnatural expression)
Overall, while there was a sharp drop in the men
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