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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of 2 groups accommodation at the middle-aged in England between 2004 and 2014.
Overall, the percent of homeowners underwent a downward trend, while the opposite was true for that of renters over 11 years. The figure of homeowners initially trebled that of renters, it was outraced in the last 2 years.
The number of homeowners aged 25-34 peaked at the highest point in 2004, at nearly 60%. In the next three years, it had a slight fluctuation with the figure being around 56%. From 2008 onward, the proportion of homeowners went down and reached the lowest point in 2014. In contrast, the figure of renters within this age range climbed significantly from 20% to about 57%. Especially in 2013 and 2014, it surpassed the number of homeowners at nearly 5% and 11% respectively. That means that people have a tendency to hire a house instead of owing.

  

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The bar chart illustrates (Wrong word) the proportion of 2 groups accommodation (Wrong expression) at the middle-aged (Wrong word) in England between 2004 and 2014. Overall, the percent of homeowners underwent a downward trend, while the opposite was true for that of renters over 11 years. The figure (Wrong word) of homeowners initially trebled (Wrong word) that of renters, it was outraced (Wrong word) in the last 2 years.

  • The bar chart illustrates (Wrong word) the proportion of 2 groups accommodation (Wrong expression) at the middle-aged (Wrong word) in England between 2004 and 2014.
  • Overall, the percent of homeowners underwent a downward trend, while the opposite was true for that of renters over 11 years.
  • The figure (Wrong word) of homeowners initially trebled (Wrong word) that of renters, it was outraced (Wrong word) in the last 2 years.
  • The number (wrong word) of homeowners aged 25-34 peake d (Wrong word) was at the highest point in 2004, at nearly 60%.
  • In the next three years, it had a s light fluctuation (Wrong word) with the figure (Wrong word) being around 56%.
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The bar chart illustrates (Wrong word) the proportion of 2 groups accommodation (Wrong expression) at the middle-aged (Wrong word) in England between 2004 and 2014.


Overall, the percent of homeowners underwent a downward tr

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