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I really need someone who coul check my essay.

This diagram is quite difficult for me to understand
, so I wasn't able to write enough 150 maximum words. Thank you so much.

The diagram explains how water is prossed to make it drinkable. There are five main stages involved in the entire process of natural rainwater to make it good enough quality to drink safety.

The first stage is called abstraction, where the water is taken out of a river via a pumping station and is passed through to a reservoir. The next major stage is clarification, with the water being cleaned by passing it through a flash mixer. Before moved to next stages, water is pressed into thicken sludge holding tank. Then it pumped into a centrifuge which removes remaining debris. Next it is lifted by conveyor belt for disposal. The next stage is filter which taking out any bits by rapid gravity filter. In disinfection stage, clorine is added to remove germs. And clened water is storaged in a reservoir to your house.

Teechr · Accepted Answer

- You didn't write the minimum required 150 words. There's plenty of information in the diagram above, so you have no excuse!

- Install an English spell checker in your text editor and/or browser. You will see it highlight "prossed", "clened" and other typos in red. Again, no excuse!

- Sludge is not good. It is removed! Do not confuse your sentences. Write one sentence about that side process, and then turn your focus back to the main process and what happens to the water.

- Write clear and simple sentences and pay attention to the diagram.

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BTS is my life · Answer

I'm sorry for my spelling mistakes and my incomplete essay. I will be more thorough. Again, thank you for the advices. Here is my revised edition:

The diagram explains how water is processed to make it drinkable. There are five main stages involved in the entire process of natural rainwater to make it good enough quality to drink safety.

The first stage is called abstraction, where the water is taken out of a river via a pumping station and is passed through to a reservoir. The next major stage is clarification, with the water being cleaned by passing it through a flash mixer. Before moved to next stages, water is pressed into a thick sludge to make it more manageable because a flash mixer is not sufficient to remove finer particle. Sludge can be disposed of by liquid injection to land or by disposal in a landfill. Then, it pumped into a centrifuge which removes remaining debris or separates liquid from solids. Next it is lifted by conveyor belt for disposal. The next stage is filter which taking out any bits by rapid gravity filter. In disinfection stage, chlorine is added to remove germs. The last stage is distribution which cleaned water is pumped on to the consumer, whether in homes, schools or workplaces.

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