Writing Task 1

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The table compares the numbers of people who watch four types of sports on television in four different nations.

It is clear from the table that more Americans, than the people of other three countries, watch sports on television. In all four countries, tennis is the most popular sport on television, whereas motor racing was by far the lowest figure.

America has the highest number with 25.2 million viewers, followed by the UK with 20.3 million. The figures for Australia and Canada arelower, respectively at 17.4 and 14.5 million. It is also noticeable that thetotal number of tennis viewers is nearly 26 million, and there arearound 6-7 million people watch it in each country.

The total athletics watchers are about 17 million, approximately two-thirds of tennis viewers. Not manypeople watch motor racing on television compared to other sports, with 12.7 million. In the USA and Canada, only 1-1.5 million people watch motor racing, but it is morepopular in the UK and Australia. Golf is very common in the USA with 11 million seers, while it is not asgeneral in the other countries.