Writing Task 1

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Task 1 Table chart

The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Here is my essay:

The table compares the numbers of watching sports on television in four different countries, in millions.

It is clear that more Americans watch sports on television than the other three nationalities. In all four countries tennis is the most popular sport on television.

America has the highest number at 25.2 million viewers, followed by the UK with 20.3 million. The figures for Australia and Canada are lower, respectively at 17.4 and 14.5 million. The total number of viewers for tennis is nearly 26 million and in each country around 6-7 million people watch it.

The total figure for athletics is about 17 million, approximately two-third the number of tennis. Not many people like watching motor racing on television compared to the other sports. In the USA and Canada only 1-1.5 million people watch motor racing but it is more popular in the UK and Australia. Golf is very popular in the USA with 11 million viewers. However it is not as popular in the other countries.