Writing task 1
The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
My essay:
Three charts above illustrate the sale of each kind of music such as Pop, Rock and Classical through sex and age group.
Overall, It is obvious that there are a variety of clear differences among three types of music mentioned. An another intriguing feature is that teenagers have a tendency to listen to Pop and Rock more frequently than the old, but classical mussic play a crucial role in senior citizen's habits.
Regarding to 25-34 age group, it can be seen that this age always listen to both of types music with over 30% in Pop and Rock. About the teenager-age group, the 16-24 is also extremely keen on Rock and Pop, while few of them still is a fan of Classical Music. People who is higher 45 years old usually are interested in Classical Music, at just over 20% compared to others, whereas some people still quite like Pop and Rock but the number of it is limited.
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0You did not adequately or accurately describe this figure. It is not about listening to music. It is not about liking music, or being a fan of music. You did not mention the profiles of buying by gender. You never mentioned the units of measure.
(What kind of chart?) Three charts above illustrate (wrong wo
0sorry in the last sentence of introduction. I mentioned 3 kind of music. Why did you say that I did't say
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