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Vietan24 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writing task 1

HELP ME FIX WRITING TASK 1 IELTS.

The line graphcommpares the quantity of overseas visitors coming to the uK For different purposes over a period of 80 years, starting from 1989. In general, there was a considerable increase in the number of visitors from abroad travelling to the uk for 3 purposes between 1981 and 2009. In particular, holiday was the most popular in types of purposes in the uk over the period shown.

  

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Please include all the instructions in English! You only wrote 67 words. In task 1, the minimum is 150.

  • Please include all the instructions in English!
  • You only wrote 67 words.
  • In task 1, the minimum is 150.
  • You need to write 3 paragraphs, but you have only one.
  • The word choices are not good ones.
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Please include all the instructions in English!

You only wrote 67 words. In task 1, the minimum is 150.
You need to write 3 paragraphs, but you have only one.
The word choices are not good ones.

There are a lot of grammatical errors.
You did not get the data correct, either.


The line graphcommpares the

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