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The table compares the proportion of national consumer spending on different items in 5 different parts of the world in 2002.

Overall, in all five countries , citizens tended to spend most of their money on food/drink/tobacco and significantly less on clothing/footwear and leisure/education.

Of the five countries, Turkish spent most on food/drink/tobacco with 32.14%. Likewise, Ireland spent 28,91% on this item compared to 18.80% by the Spain, 16.36% by the Italy and 15.77% by the Sweden.

In contrast to the percentage of consumer enpenditure on food/drink/tobacco , clothing/footwear and leisure/education was lower than a tenth. The Italy spent most of all five countries : 9% on clothing/footwear. In Turkey,Spain,Ireland,Italy spent only 6.63%, 6.51% , 6.43% , 5.40%, respectively. On the other hand, the average percentage that residents spent on leisure/education wasn't exceed 5%. In Sweden, Italy, Ireland , and Spain was only 3.22%, 3.2% , 2.21%, and 1.98% , respectively. Even in Turkey people spent 4.35% more than other countries compared to, but still less than 5%

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Topic: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table compares the proportion of national consumer spending on different items in five

The table compares the proportion of national consumer spending on different items in five 5 different parts of the world (wrong usage. For example, Ireland is not "a part of the world") in 2002.

Overall, in all five countries , citizens tended to spend most of their money (Not quite right. The totals do not add up to 100%, so you have no idea if another category, such as housing, was even larger than this one. Use "more" not "most". ) on food/drink/tobacco and significantly less on clothing/footwear and leisure/education.

Of the five countries, Turkish (wrong form) spent most on food/drink/tobacco with 32.14%. Likewise, Ireland spent 28,91% on this item compared to 18.80% by the Spain, 16.36% by the Italy and 15.77% by the Sweden. (Good try, but wrong usage. Most country names are not used with an article. Exceptions are "The Soviet Union," "The Netherlands" and "The United Kingdom."

Model sentence: The Turks spent more on "food/drink/tobacco" than the Irish, the Spanish, the Italians, or the Swedes. )

In contrast to the percentage of consumer enpenditure (spelling. Also "spending" is a better word.) on food/drink/tobacco , clothing/footwear and leisure/education was lower than a tenth. (Ungrammatical. I don't understand this.) The Italy spent (missing word) most of all five countries : 9% (wrong punctuation) on clothing/footwear. In Turkey,Spain,Ireland,Italy spent only 6.63%, 6.51% , 6.43% , 5.40%, respectively. (Ungrammatical. Also there are spacing errors after the commas) On the other hand, the average percentage that residents spent on leisure/education wasn't (wrong word) exceed 5%. In Sweden, Italy, Ireland , and Spain was only 3.22%, 3.2% , 2.21%, and 1.98% , respectively. (Ungrammatical.) Even in Turkey people spent 4.35% more than (missing words) other countries ~~compared to~~, but still less than 5% (missing punctuation.)

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