The line graph illustrates the number of Japanese wages monthly in average , and how much color TV and black and white TV are costed over the period in 30 years ( 1953-1983)
Overall, it is immediately obvious that the price of two types TV experienced downward trends while the opposite was in the income monthly of Japaneses from 1953 to 1983. Meanwhile , the cost of color TV, and black and white TV registerd higher than the salary of Japaneses.
In 1953, the black and white TV costed about 110 thousands Yen which was the highest number of money in all. This figure began declining rapidly after nearly 10 years and continue dropoed down to 20 thousands Yen in 1983. A similar trend was witnessed in the price of color TV which appeared quite late and observed to 100 thousands Yen at the first time ( in 1961) . After that, it sharp went down and stopped at under 50 thousands Yen in the end of the period
On the other side, the wages monthly average of Japaneses started just only at below 20 thousands Yen in 1953 but having a dramatic rise and overtook the rice of black and white TV , and color TV before in 1973 and in 1980 respectively. Finally , it soared to almost 70 thousands Yen in 2030.
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