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Vishnu26 Posted 10 years ago
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Tips to reduce the risk of diabetes -

1. people who are at the border of diabetes, need to drink lot of water. they should eat food in time. not eating at proper time, consuming less water may increase the risk of diabetes.
2. exercise is must for any age. especially youth and middle aged people should involve in physical activity. walking for an hour or jogging would help.
3. early to bed and early to rise is a very good habit. a person should sleep for ample amount of time. sleeping at late night will cause headache, disturbances in sleeping patterns.
4. avoid junk food and decrease sugar content foods. high level sugar content food like soft drinks, sweets should be consumed less.
  

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Capitalize the first letter of all sentences. Check articles and verb forms.
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still on which topics in need to improve?
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1. People who are at the borderline of diabetics es, need to drink a lot of water. They should eat food at regular time intervals. in time. Not eating at proper meals at regular time intervals, and not drinking enough consuming less water may increase the risk of
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vishnu26Still, on in which topics in areas do I need to improve?
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You're welcome. Note that the text highlighted in orange is a little off topic.
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