Writing practice for IELTS

0 00New one if you could help me correct this subject.00Wondering if I can do something in return?00Dear Sirs,00I am writing this letter to let you know the accident I had in the car I hired from you.00I was just about going to go the public road from the parking of the restaurant named “Mike’s” when blue BMW came into the parking and hit our car.00I was stopping because of the difficulty to judge whether safe or not since the big sigh board of the restaurant disturbs the sight to the road.00The car got bit of scratch mark on the right corner of the front side whereas The BMW got bigger scratch on the left corner of the front side.00No one got injured, so we did not go to the police.00I hired the car April 20 at ABC branch. 00I informed my insurance company contact person name and telephone number to him, and got a his insurance company telephone number in return (telephone number and name:---).00The insurance company would contact you soon.00I just wanted to let you know the details in advance.00Sincerely, 0-