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Doanxuanquy Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writing practice

Is it OK to write the following sentences:

1. the fact that celebrities’ privacy is at stake is just one of many inevitable products of fame
that have been long acknowledged.

2. With the ever-increasing development of social media and social networking sites, the media increasingly has enormous impacts on the public, including celebrities. In my opinion, the fact that famous people are vulnerable to a lack and an invasion of privacy is just one of many inevitable results of widespread attention from the media and the public.

  

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Can you express those same ideas in a simpler and more-direct manner?

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Can you express those same ideas in a simpler and more-direct manner?

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It has been long acknowledged that the privacy of celebrities is one of many inevitable prices of fame.

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