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Would you please some one tell her/his idea about the following passage:

Learning from the other people is one the suitable way for increasing our database. Some people believes that the educated people can be the better teacher in our life, but the others think that there are still some things that we can learn from the other one with the lack of education. In my opinion, I prefer the second group's idea.
To begin with, as every body knows, "the experience is the best teacher in life" & this is clear that every one can obtain her/his especial experience just by living in the world. I mean our life with whole sadness & happiness, win & lose & so on, brings this perfect treasure for us which can be transferred to other one like our next generation. As the matter of fact, in this way all the human kind are the same, regardless of their education, wealth & so forth. For example, by facing the problem in our life, each one has her/his specific ways to challenge it. My experience, as an educated person, shows that some times the uneducated people can offer the better way for this problem because of their great experiences which can support them. Therefore they bring this opportunity for me to learn from their. For instance, I've learnt from my illiterate grand pa, that keep my persistence in each activity which I'm supposed or wish to complete it. I found this from his life stories & the all hard situations which he had to deal with them. The summary of his life attitude which I really proud at it, is " never, never give up".
On the other hand, some individuals resist to approve this opinion. Their most reason is pointing out their lack of knowledge about the current technology. This idea some times let them to behave really impolitely & disrespectful. I think, It is unfair & it could be better to share our knowledge with them instead of having the bad temper. For example, in some cases they did not have the similar chance in their life because of their poverty or so on.
To conclude, Although some people believe that there is no valuable thing that we can learn from the uneducated persons, my belief is in the contrast. Because of all above mentions, each human is like a closed book that is filled with her/ his life experience that can be transferred to others as a guidance path to bring more prosperities in their life.

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