WRITING PART 2 IELTS

Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other parts of life. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What problems does this cause? Can you suggest some solutions to this issue?

It is true that to harmonize the time allocated for work and other aspects in life is one of the goals every individuals probably want to achieve in order to have an satisfaction career path, however not many can manage this balance. Therefore, this essay will discuss some of the drawbacks of this problems and recommend ways for people to solve it.

To begin with, an imbalance work - life can cause many great disadvantages for people. Firstly, workers who are suffering with it will be prone to have more serious health problems such as diabetes or obesity than others due to the fact that they have to be under intense pressure everyday cause by a heavy workload or workplace conflicts. Moreover, employees may also have to work overnight regularly, which would make them unable to do any physical exercises or pursue their personal hobbies. Secondly, this issue can experience a negative impact on the upbringing of children because their parents are too busy on their business, hence, neglect to take care of their children. My friend, for example, has a struggle in spelling the words correctly as her parents did not teach her appropriately when she was a child because they have to go on many business trips back then.

Nevertheless, is possible for people to solve this problem with these solutions, First of all, rather than focus on a multitude works as the same time, workers have to be aware of what task is more prioritize than the other then complete it first. By putting all the concentration to do only one job at the time, people can do it more effectively, therefore, it will take lesser time to be finished, then individuals can have some spare time for themselves. Secondly, devising a time table will help individuals to manage their time more efficiently. As people normally spend too much time for unimportant things like watching movies or listening to musics and lesser time for their essential jobs, thus, a time table will surmount this problem by limited the amount of time individual can spent on an activity.

In conclusion, even though to achieve work - life balance is not easy and the negative impact it may brings is immensely serious, I believe people can still overcome this problem by doing some of the above solutions.