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Deer Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing
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Last week you went to a birthday party . This is part of a letter you have received from your English penfriend, Annabel.
In your last letter you said you were going to birthday party. Please tell me what you did at the party. What present did you take for your friend? Did every one enjoy themselves?
·Now write a letter to Annabel answering her questions.
·Write your letter on your answer sheet.
My writing
Dear Annabel,
How are you? I hope you are well. When I were going to party, I talked with my friends a long time, I was dancing with my boy friend’s, I took a photograph and I was eating a delicious food . I had a nice time there.
Actually, I confused between many present because all present in shop more expensive and I really I didn’t have enough money but I bought perform it was very nice and a design professional .
Beside, all people there were very happy because every thing was available there and really I had a nice time there
I’m looking forward to see you as soon as if you can possible.
Best wishes,
deer
Please correct that to me
Question
Last week you went to a birthday party . This is part of a letter you have received from your English penfriend, Annabel.
In your last letter you said you were going to birthday party. Please tell me what you did at the party. What present did you take for your friend? Did every one enjoy themselves?
·Now write a letter to Annabel answering her questions.
·Write your letter on your answer sheet.
My writing
Dear Annabel,
How are you? I hope you are well. When I were going to party, I talked with my friends a long time, I was dancing with my boy friend’s, I took a photograph and I was eating a delicious food . I had a nice time there.
Actually, I confused between many present because all present in shop more expensive and I really I didn’t have enough money but I bought perform it was very nice and a design professional .
Beside, all people there were very happy because every thing was available there and really I had a nice time there
I’m looking forward to see you as soon as if you can possible.
Best wishes,
deer
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Dear Annabel,
How are you? I hope you are well. When I was at the party, I talked with my friends a long time, danced with my boyfriend, took photographs, and ate delicious food. I had a nice time there.
[Actually, I confused between many present because all present in shop more expensive and I really I didn’t have enough money but I bought perform it was very nice and a desig
How are you? I hope you are well. When I was at the party, I talked with my friends a long time, danced with my boyfriend, took photographs, and ate delicious food. I had a nice time there.
[Actually, I confused between many present because all present in shop more expensive and I really I didn’t have enough money but I bought perform it was very nice and a desig
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