Writing my thoughts after reading book (is that right?)

hello.

it's my first step.

i write my thoughts after read the book .

book name is Charlotte 's Web

i need to know that what is problem my writing , and ..how can i fix them..

as you know , my english ability is very low .

under the writing , in the chapter 5,6 ..

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Charlotte

Charlotte is spider. she be known eat bugs,insects,flies, for life herself. Wilbur

make a friend, that's she as my be talked.

actually, Wilbur so lonely, because he very young pig only one of the barn.

nobody talk to him. he didn't delicious food. Just need love.

he has waiting ferm. but she didn't came that's a reason.

suddenly he heard voice in darkness, but he didn't saw who said.

next morning he known who said to he that's she.

Summer days

Peaceful, Coolling breezes, all enough to eat fish for children and the barn

also have happy something. that's goose has hatched seven eggs.

but strangely , all i known that eggas not 7. it was 8 but keep reading,

the one egg be taken by rat.

all animals saw disgusting happening.

I felt that's very wrong to him. Sometime As i saw programs about animal for wild.

9 of 10 , you can see babeis was attacked by intruders- adult animal.

it's so sadly to me

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that 's it.

..honestly i hesitated to this post up this homepage.

but i don't give up .

someone be showed to my fault, weakness, that's a shame.

but i continue learn english.

thanks for reading.