Writing III

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3. Do you know some teachers in the school who like to dress formally? Why do they prefer formal to casual?

Some teachers in the school prefer dress formally to casually. There are a number of good reasons for doing this.

First of all, they like dressing formal clothes because they believe that this can make them look smarter and professional. Perhaps they feel more comfortable and more confident when dress formally than casually. Then, they could do well in a good mood. Some teachers says that if they dress down, students may don't like it. For more information, some schools in Vietnam require teachers to dress 'ao dai' (a traditional Vietnamese clothes). And this will help them be more attractive.

In conclusion, dressing formally in school is essential. Every teacher should wear professional clothes./data/user/0/com.samsung.android.app.notes/files/clipdata/clipdata_190717_084742_247.sdoc->