Writing ietls task 1: Pie chart and table

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Title ( from Cambridge 15): The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.Given are two figures providing information about the destination of Anthropology, as well as how much they earn money per month after working in five years.It is evident from the information in the pie chart provided that most of Anthropology graduate finding full-time work account for over fifty percent. The amount of people combining part-time work with postgrad study accounts for twenty percent. Besides, just eight percent of graduates choose to study postgrad full time and the proportion of unknown information is given in the pie chart.After working in five years, most Anthropologists find jobs. The highest salary of working in the government sector is chosen by half of a hundred percent compared to freelance consultants (less than 10 percent) and private companies (less than 20 percent). On the other hand, the account of people earning twenty-five thousand dollars to almost fifty thousand dollars in private companies is twice as big as the government sector or private companies.Overall, most Anthropology has salaries of more than twenty-five thousand dollars after five years’ work and it is interesting to note that the prevalence of jobs is over one hundred thousand dollars in the government sector. (189 words) ( hope to be updated quickly, please admin because I a going to take IELTS

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Anna Walker( hope to be updated quickly

That makes no sense.

I hope that you will give me feedback soon.

Anna Walker I a going to take IELTS

That is ungrammatical. If you write like this, you will not get a good score.

Anna Walker · Answer

it's not my fault. I remember posting images. Ok, let me post again. please, help me to learn to change my future

Anna Walker · Answer

I also haven't seen my image posted though i surely posted it, I am not kidding. I really want to study

Anna Walker · Answer

Given are two figures providing information about the destination of Anthropology, as well as how much they earn money per month after working in five years.

It is evident from the information in the pie chart provided that most of Anthropology graduate finding full-time work account for over fifty percent. The amount of people combining part-time work with postgrad study accounts for twenty percent. Besides, just eight percent of graduates choose to study postgrad full time and the proportion of unknown information is given in the pie chart.

After working in five years, most Anthropologists find jobs. The highest salary of working in the government sector is chosen by half of a hundred percent compared to freelance consultants (less than 10 percent) and private companies (less than 20 percent). On the other hand, the account of people earning twenty-five thousand dollars to almost fifty thousand dollars in private companies is twice as big as the government sector or freelance consultants.

Overall, most Anthropology has salaries of more than twenty-five thousand dollars after five years’ work and it is interesting to note that the prevalence of jobs is over one hundred thousand dollars in the government sector. (189 words)

Anna Walker · Answer

ok, I finally complete to post image. Sorry guys, I am not used to using this web, but I really want to study and improve English level, not kidding because I am going to pass university

Anna Walker · Answer

( You must have disappointed me so much and thought that I wrote such ridiculous essays. In fact, up to now, I haven't still been taught writing IELTS except you. So now I am like a blind person, I try to read lots of samples before writing in my own style, I don't want to copy then page all of them because if I do this, I will never remember anything and make progress. I just want to pick up some useful collocations from them. The problem here that I even don't know what word should be used exactly in each type of writing in task 1. I really beg you not to leave me alone. I don't have more time anymore ( I will take the IELTS exam in April 2021, so all my writing isn't totally written for kidding). I will learn and fix all mistakes that you correct for me. Please, don't give me alone. I think about you as my teacher.)

Here is my rewriting, (I try to do my best as much as possible and limit to do as possible as I can. I am serious to write, pie chart and table or line graph ( the first time I have written to them). if there are still lots of mistakes this second time, I just only hope you ( with a little patience for the beginner like me) to correct my essay and give me some advice on how to work better and get a higher band.)

The pie chart provides information about what Anthropologists graduating from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course, as well as the percentage of salaries that the anthropologists get in work after five years.

From the information in the pie chart provided the majority of Anthropology graduates finding full-time work with fifty percent. The percentage of people combining part-time work with the postgrad study is twenty percent. Besides, just eight percent of graduates choose to study postgrad full time and the information about all the rest of graduates is unknown (with eight percent).

After five-year working, most Anthropologists have salaries of more than twenty-five thousand dollars. Fifty percent of people work in government and earn the highest salaries of about fifty percent, compared to freelance consultants (less than 10 percent) and private companies (less than 20 percent). On the other hand, the proportion of people earning twenty-five thousand dollars to almost fifty thousand dollars in private companies are twice as much as the government sector or free consultants.

In general, the higher salaries for each type of employment are supplied, the more Anthropology graduates work there. (187 words)

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