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Writing ielts task 1 the subject is https://ieltsonlinetests.com/vi/ielts-mock-test-2021-july-writing-practice-test-1

The given chart depicts how many phones were bought of the five most popular mobile phone brands, namely Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG and ZTE over the period of 4 years, starting from 2009.

It's manifest that during 4 years, a lot of people tended to buy products from Samsung and Nokia, while Apple, LG and ZTE didn't sell as many phones as those brands.

Regards samsung, not many people purchased items of it in 2009. the quantity was about 240 and then, it rose considerably to 450 in 2013. Similarly, in 2009 , Apple consumed only 25 products, however, to 2013, that figure ascent significantly to 150. In addition, ZTE was the least favourite brand of public,the quantity of phones consumed was under one-ninth of Nokia in 2009. 3 years later, it grew slightly by approximately 10.

In terms of LG, in 2009, over 100 phones were bought and subsequently, LG witness a marginal decrease to about 80. Besides, in the year 2009, the mass of consumers loved items of Nokia, around 450. Nevertheless, in 2013, there was a sharp downward trend to 250 was seen.

  

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