Writing IELTS task 1. ( please check my best essay)

Question: the line graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

Answer:

The line graph compares the car, bus, and train in terms of the number of daily users over a period of 60 years.

Over a period shown, among the three means of transport mentioned in the line graph, the car is by far the most used one in the UK. Also, the number of people commuting on a daily basis by train and car grow gradually and the number of the bus fell steadily.

In 1970, the car was used by 5 million UK commuters to travel on a daily basis, while the bus was used by around 4 million almost double trains at 2 million. 10 years later, while the bus kept its amount of passengers stable, both cars and trains had slightly rose by about 200.000.

During the years of 1980 and 2015, the number of those using cars and buses experienced an upward trend when the car rose to 7 million in 2015, the train reached 3 million and 5 hundred at the same year, and bus, by contrast, experienced an upward trend that met the train at the same point in 2015.

By 2030, the average number of people who commuting car is expected to reach the top at 9 million while the train is predicted to keep rising, to nearly 5 million and take the second place of the train which is estimated to become the less popular choice of the three transport with only 3 million daily users .