Writing Ielts task 1

The table given presents the different figures of computer market share from six computer industrialists between 2006 and 2007.

Overall, the American manufacturers witnessed an upward trend in computer purchase while the contemporary consumers were unlikely to buy the products from Asia business.

During one year, the percentage of HP computers sold still remained the leading position, an exponential rise of 3%, holding approximately one-third of the total survey. Followed by the impressive data of Dell computers with a fifth, increasing by an unimaginable 4%; thus, Dell became the second popular trade name of computer manufacturers. Similarly, that only one computer brand from Asia was Toshiba experienced a prosperous year’s period, constituting over 10.7% of the total market share.

In contrast, in one year’s time, the market share of other brands (Acer, Lenovo, and Fujitsu-Siemens) generally dropped by 1% to 2%. 2007 saw a dramatic fall in the market share of Acer, with the figure peaking at roundly a tenth but it still occupied the third position. The same can be seen in the data of Lenovo and Fujitsu-Siemens, the quantity of purchase Fujitsu-Siemens computers in 2007 decreased considerably, being even half as many as in a previous year with only 2.3% of the whole survey.