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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

It is observed that there is a growing trend of pampering children by their parents in modern society. From my perspective, it is definitely not a good way to foster kids and these children would suffer undesirable impacts from this kind of upbringing.

It is irrefutable that parents always tend to indulge their children and give them unconditional love, however, educating children always requires strict discipline. Youngsters who have not fully developed their recognition yet are always affected by the habit and action of their parents. Therefore, the indulgence of parents breeds spoiled kids who always pester for whatever they want, which is a contributor to their characteristics in the future.

There are several pressing results that can be ascribed to the children indulgence of their parents. The first and obvious consequence of this education method is that children who are always indulged by parents are likely to become over-reliant in all aspects of life, which are a precursor of losing the ability to live independently in the future. In addition, indulgent children who are given anything they want in their childhood tend to involve juvenile delinquency when their parents cannot meet their unreasonable demands. As a result, they are likely to involve young criminals as one of the quickest ways to get what they want without hardworking and dedication.

In conclusion, educating children requires accurate and disciplined methods due to the significant impacts on children’s characteristics in the future. To avoid detrimental consequences in the future, therefore, educating children in the right directions should be