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1. Does it makes sense to you to wear the uniform ceremonies? Why or why not? (Give reasons, try to convince each other)

Most schools require students to put on a uniform when they at school. I believe that the principals have their own reasons to do that. However, I also concur that children could dress down in casual clothes at school on some special days.

Wearing a smart uniform will help them to look more professional. A uniform is also a symbol of the school. There would be less discrimination. For example, some people may judge you because of your clothes are not fashionable. Another reason is that when we have uniforms, we could spend less money on other clothes due to we wear uniforms almost every day. Like instead of going shopping to buy clothes every month, we just have to purchase clothes twice a year.

On the other hand, some students don't like to wear uniforms. They think that uniforms are old fashion. In fact, wearing the same clothes every day is boring. Also, if students are allowed to dress down in casual clothes, they might probably feel more comfortable. In addition, some of them say that they want to wear fashionable clothes in some occasions. For instance, on the opening ceremony, they could dress suits or dress, not uniforms.

In my opinion, wearing the uniforms has many benefits, so we need to keep doing this. Nevertheless, schools should allow students to wear what they like in one or two days of the week./data/user/0/com.samsung.android.app.notes/files/clipdata/clipdata_190717_084323_613.sdoc->