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Apprentice123 Posted 10 years ago
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Twenty years after the first time that a ride a bike, in my thirties, sitting in a sofa in the garage of my father house when I was talking with him, that reminder came to the fore. I was not sure if my father remember that day. Trying to know if he remember, I asked him.

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Twenty years after I first rode a bike, I was in my thirties, sitting on a sofa in the garage of my father's house, talking with him, when that memory came to mind. I was not sure if my father remembered that day. To find out if he remembered, I asked him.

  • Twenty years after I first rode a bike, I was in my thirties, sitting on a sofa in the garage of my father's house, talking with him, when that memory came to mind.
  • I was not sure if my father remembered that day.
  • To find out if he remembered, I asked him.
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Twenty years after I first rode a bike, I was in my thirties, sitting on a sofa in the garage of my father's house, talking with him, when that memory came to mind. I was not sure if my father remembered that day. To find out if he remembered, I asked him.

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