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Sand-dumes Posted 18 years ago
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writing for a non profitable society

1span00To uplift the Society of the down trodden, The "VICTORY INDIA CHARITABLE TENT OF RESCUE YACHT" shall involve itself in activities such as awareness programmes, academic-education, care services, pre-school, education, nutrition, health education, social education, vocational, industrial, agricultural, training centers, construction of houses, roads, bridges, sanitary blocks, hostels, orphanage, schools, community centers, home for aged & disabled. 02br
00 To provide education and training, life settlement to the children of Autism, severely disabled and learning disabled children, Hearing Impaired children, Blind children, C.P.M.R Children, Infected / Affected by HIV / AIDS , Unfortunate children, Street/Working children, Children of life prisoners, Tribal children, Children of prostitutes, Children in Prostitution and neglected children. 02br
00 To carry out the activities against poverty, hunger and diseases to be online with the human rights as per the norms of the Governments. 02br
00 To associate with other local Church Ministries, to promote the activities of the Ministry. 02br
00 To meet the Social and Spiritual needs of Deaf / Disabled people through innovative Christian work. 02br
00 To help the children to experience the love and the salvation offered by Jesus Christ to have a healthier more stable life style. 02span
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00 01b00can someone go throught this and make corrections and suggestions .. I will be highly obliged.. as it states its for deaf and dumb children.02b00.0-
  

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00To improve conditions for the less-fortunate, The 01span00"VICTORY INDIA CHARITABLE TENT OF RESCUE YACHT"02span00 shall involve itself in activities such as awareness programmes, academic education, care services, pre-school education, nutrition, health education, social education, vocational, industri
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0Thanks for replying ... in the mean time i made following alterations to previous text.02br
00To dignify00 00Society of the underprivileged and deprived00 00, The "VICTORY INDIA CHARITABLE TENT OF RESCUE YACHT" will00 00endorse programmes00 00such as00 00academic education starting00 00from Nursery till Higher00 00Secondary Sch

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