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One cultule shock that I experienced when I first arrived in the U.S is the family life. The first reason for this is that in my culture, family is the most important thing. People growing up in the same culture as mine are likely to enjoy spending time with family. For example, mother usually prepares nutrious and delicious dinner for the whole family after a long day at workplace or school. During the dinner, every member sits around the table, eating, talking and sharing. On the other hand, American family seems to spend time with each other on a less frequent basic. American children are busy with their extracurricula activities while their parents are confronted with late working hour. In addition, parents in the U.S often find it hard to prepare a decent meal for their family. Instead, they may rely on the help of already-preapared food and fast-food restaurants. Another reason is that children in my culture have a more intimate and closer relationship with their relatives. For instance, at weekends, my family will invites my aunts, my uncles and my cousins to our house. We would have a small cosy meal together, enjoying the whale of time. This gives me a feeling of belonging and happiness. In the U.S, children and teenagers tend to spend more time with their friends. Likewise, parents allocate most of their time on their work or social cirle. Moreover, American people are not as close with their cousins as those in my culture. In short, I concede that family, a lasting treasure, is rarely considered a priority for most American people.