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Favorite Place Descriptive essayI think we all have a favorite place in our mind. The place that i visited was amazing, very beautiful and i’ll never see any other place like the place that i saw, The name of the place  was Nha Trang in Viet Nam. People will easily be knocked down  by the charm and dynamic of this beautiful coastal city.The first, is its beach, which anyone who has a chance to visit Nha Trang always leaves the place with satisfied.The beach is wonderful with sunlight and sea waves. The sea water with a lot of color formed the mysterious beauty. I felt very comfortable and pleasant at this place.The second, Nha Trang has modern and entertaining resorts. You can join tours to visit interesting place in the city is Vinpearl Land, Binh Ba, Van Phong Bay,  Diep Son, Hon Tam resorts, Po Nagar Cham Towers,...They have hotels, restaurants, and many fun activities useful.The thirst, food in Nha Trang very delicious. Nha Trang city not only owns many scenic spots, tourist island big and small but also treat guests delicious food. Mostly from various kinds of seafood is Bun cha ca, Bun sua, Nem Ninh Hoa, Bun Ca Dam,... I always remember the taste of the food in here.In concluding, natural conditions are diverse and rich,  help Nha Trang has become one of the most important tourist hubs of Viet Nam and attracted more and more tourists home and abroad. Although I go away, Nha Trang is always my favorite place.

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You need to practice writing complex sentences. You need to study clauses and clause structures.

I think we all have a favorite place in our mind. The place that i (This is the 9th letter of the English alphabet. It is not a word you can use in writing!) visited was amazing, very beautiful and i’ll never see any other place like the place that i saw, The name of the place was Nha Trang in Viet Nam. People will easily be knocked down (Will they be hurt?) by the charm and dynamic of this beautiful coastal city.

The first (First what?), is its beach, which anyone who has a chance to visit Nha Trang always leaves the place with satisfied.The beach is wonderful with sunlight and sea waves. The sea water with a lot of color formed the mysterious beauty. I felt very comfortable and pleasant at this place.

The second (The second place?) , Nha Trang has modern and entertaining resorts. You can join tours to visit interesting place in the city is (You just ruined your sentence by putting a verb here.) Vinpearl Land, Binh Ba, Van Phong Bay, Diep Son, Hon Tam resorts, Po Nagar Cham Towers,...They have hotels, restaurants, and many fun activities useful.

The thirst, (Thirst = you need to drink water.) food in Nha Trang (Where is your verb?) very delicious. Nha Trang city not only owns many scenic spots, tourist island big and small but also treat guests delicious food. Mostly from various kinds of seafood is Bun cha ca, Bun sua, Nem Ninh Hoa, Bun Ca Dam,... I always remember the taste of the food in here.

In concluding, natural conditions are diverse and rich, help Nha Trang has become (You cannot put verbs at many places in the same clause! That is not good English. ) one of the most important tourist hubs of Viet Nam and attracted more and more tourists home and abroad. Although I go away, Nha Trang is always my favorite place.

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