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Lordskorpz Posted 8 years ago
Grammar
Writing coherent sentences
How can I write the following sentences better? (Bonus: how could I have phrased that question better?)
"Callum was tired so he went to bed." "Why was he tired?" "He was playing video games last night" Today, Samantha, a local life guard, received a reward. She was rewarded for saving a child from drowning. "I am going to the shop. Do you want anything?" Me and my band, will be performing at the Red Horse tonight. Would you like to come and watch us play? "Hi, I received a text message. It said, there is a certificate for me to collect from the college"Top answer
" Today, Samantha, a local life guard, received a reward. She was rewarded for saving a child from drowning. "I am going to the shop.
- " Today, Samantha, a local life guard, received a reward.
- She was rewarded for saving a child from drowning.
- "I am going to the shop.
- " Me and My band and I will be performing at the Red Horse tonight.
- Would you like to come and watch us play?
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"Callum was tired so he went to bed." "Why was he tired?" "He had been playing video games last night."
Today, Samantha, a local life guard, received a reward. She was rewarded for saving a child from drowning.
"I am going to the shop. Do you want anything?"
Me and My band and I will be performing at the Red Horse tonight. Would you like to com
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