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00Topic: If you could make 2 changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system12blockquote

10Although there are still a lot of drawbacks in our country's educational system, I think to most important thing that should be changed immediately is the amount of work students have to do and the changing of school time becuase these two matters come hand in hand with each other.02br
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00The first matter is the thing that every schooler in my country is concerned about. Nowsaday, children are forced to learn too much. The higher grade you are, the more subjects you have to deal with. A 10 grader approximately has to handle 14 subjects simultaneously though many of them are unimportant. Although the ideal of well-rounded education is good, we are still complaining of having too much of the theory instead of hands-on experience in subjects like Physics or Chemistry. The chances of us going in the laboratory is very little, about 1 to 4 times a semester. Furthermore, the equipments are so poor both in quantity and quality. Still, students at big city is more lucky than those at remote areas who hardly get a chance to do any experiment in their whole school life!02br
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00The second matter is also a just hing that the department of education in our country should have conducted a long time ago. Too many subjects-too much knowledge to take in- a junior high students have to work nearly 10 hours a day while a high school one might be more. However, schools require their students to be there before 6:45 am and 12:15 pm. Among the sequences of that are sleep depirvation and lethargy. Students usually feel very depressed and tired of maintaining scores. 02br
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00 To put it in a nutshell, I think the two things above should be handled as soon as possible so that we could have a better education. We the students have been waiting for a small change for a long time, yet we have seen not any.02br
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01b00Thanks in advance02b0-