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Do you speak English?

Are you interested in art?

Would you like a holiday job where you could meet people from all over the world?

We are looking for someone to work in the city Art Gallery shop during the holidays. No experience is necessary but you must be friendly and helpful and have some interest in art.

Contact Mrs Donovan at the City Art Gallery.

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to you to express my interest in vacancy currently available in the city Art Gallery shop through the gap year. According to the job description, I believe that the experiences and skills I have developed at university can help me to undertake this position very quickly and with good performance.

At present I am studying English at Thai Nguyen University of Education. My English communication skill is quite good, so I am fluent. I recently participate in English club, as part of my studies. Moreover, I also speak a little English.

Should I have the meeting with you, I will stand a chance of extending my character. I am sociable and enthusiastic, especial I know some ways to help people. I would very much like to land a job, because I really interest in art and I am very keen to improve my literature skills. Last summer, I volunteered my services for Thai Nguyen Museum of Ethnology, which was useful experience for the post.

I am sure I would make a success of this job. I hope you will consider my application and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Linh