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Lia lilia Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Writing an Essay

Could you please correct this essay introduction:

It is a really important statement because everyone needs to have such an interesting job. Therefore I agree with this opinion and I will try to explain by the arguments.

Thank you in advance.

  

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lia lilia It is a really important statement "It"? What is "it"? You can't start an essay without telling us what it's about.

— CalifJim

  • lia lilia It is a really important statement "It"?
  • What is "it"?
  • You can't start an essay without telling us what it's about.
  • CJ
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lia liliaIt is a really important statement

"It"? What is "it"? You can't start an essay without telling us what it's about.

CJ

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I agree that everyone should have a job that interests them, even though in reality, it is not always the case.

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