Writing an email to my teacher

Here is my email to my teacher to ask if she already gave some feedback to my draft (the emails will give you the idea of what's going on). I feel like I made my teacher angry. I would appreciate it if anybody could fix my email about grammar, sentence structures, clarity, etc and what I should and shouldn't have written in that email. Thank you.

(I removed Hello, and names at the beginning and end of theirs)

My Email:

I'm just wondering if you had a chance to skim my draft. I wanted to know if there are any major mistakes in my paper or any things I need to add or reorganize since I plan to make the slides tonight. It's fine if you didn't though. I was to ask you after lab but you were busy talking. Her reply:I haven’t had any time at all today. I have been in class since 8 am (and am just now finishing up and organizing my papers to go home. As I said in lab today, I am going to compile all of the feedback that you received from peer review with final comments from me, but that may not be until Friday that I get it back to you (I have already given you two rounds of feedback, and while I know you are eager to finish, I do have to be sure I am also providing feedback to other students in this class and other classes). Please be patient – I was talking to students briefly after lab about concerns they had with grading in another course, but I also had to discuss a paper with another student.